a small melody

[helliott]

Noodling around after working on my Epiphone semi and stumbled across a chord sequence and melody I thought was kinda pretty. Recording is very raw, threw a bass bit in to see if it had potential. I just kinda liked the melody and changes, really. Input welcome as always.
http://www.box.net/shared/2rg7otuncn

[sunvalleylaw]

I liked it very much. The verse reminds me of something until the change in chord pattern. But I cannot say what. Lot's of good potential and very sweet melody!

[Tig]

I like how the melody weaves in and out of the bass line.
It reminds me a little of Dire Straits' Telegraph Road.
Nice!

[sunvalleylaw]

Yeah, I got Dire Straits feel out of it as well, but did not post that. But it can certainly have its own thing too. Lots to work with I think.

[baldgit]

lovely tone on the guitar...definitely a tune that could be developed....I like it!

[Justaguyin_nc]

I liked it helliott, I got a willie nelson western/spanish'ish feeling from it.. would like to see where it goes..:applause

[helliott]

Thanks guys. It's nice to hear others agree it has some merit. We'll see where it goes.