I Pressed Record And This Happend

[GREENMACHINE]

Hey guys,
This is a song/jam thing that just came out when I was mucking around in Logic, I just pressed record and this is what came out. Its a bit rough in places but I didn't think it was too bad for an improvised song lol.

Anyways, let me know what you guys think.

http://www.box.net/shared/f6c4jqiuqq

I'm playing all guitar parts and the bass part, the drums are just a random loop I found from Garageband.

Many thanks,
Cav

[SuperSwede]

Very nice Mr. Green.

[oldguy]

Not bad, Cavelle, not bad:applause .........what guitar were you using, your Strat?

Refresh my old memory.....how old are you now? 18? :thwap

[helliott]

Very nice, Green fellow. My only criticism would be that the lead is a bit too far in front of the rest of the track, so the BT gets buried sometimes. If you're remixing, or just for when you next record, I'd try to get the balance a bit more even so the melody/lead feels like it's right down in the mix with the rest of the stuff. (I know this happens as I've done the same thing lots. Just need to think about that aspect when mastering.)
Keep up the great work!:rockya

[GREENMACHINE]

Hey guys,
Thanks for nice comments.
Hey Glenn, I'm 17 now. I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks for the advice Helliot, I get a bit carried away and turn the solo track up, but yeah I definitely need to make it fit in the mix more.

Thanks again guys

[Katastrophe]

Great job, Cav!

What did you use for amplification? Lead and rhythm tones sound great.

[GREENMACHINE]

Thanks Kat :)
I'm going from the line out of my Boss ME-70 straight into my macbook. The rhythm track is recorded with an Ibanez acoustic guitar with some chorus added to it.

Cheers,
Cav

[MAXIFUNK]

Good work keep it up!!!:applause :applause

[GREENMACHINE]

Thanks Maxifunk :)

[Fretz]

Very nice Mr. Green!!

Am I hearing some Gary Moore influence in there?