Reply With QuoteThats a great tune. Well played and fun and good singing and nice balance. Could use a little extra something on the outro.
Thanks for that.:
Call it Fives
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Song #3
I probably should have chosen a better title for this one.
5's
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Awesome!
Thats a great tune. Well played and fun and good singing and nice balance. Could use a little extra something on the outro.
Thanks for that.
Call it Fives
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Hey Moshe, thanks for listening. Yeah it probably needs a few things, but I'll leave well enough alone before I totally mess it up. I'll take your suggestion and change the title to Fives. Thanks
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Suhnton - really catchy tune! Good work all around, and I like the vocal style.
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Yea that was good(catchy)I listen to it all the way through.That means it
caught my attention didnt click off it to come back later good job!!! Sumi
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tjcurtin1 & sumitomo, cheers for the comments.
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very niceeee: i love the guitars simplicty and the only thing i would possibly change is maybe bring the vocals out a little more because it gets muddy over the split rhythm guitars (which by the way sounds phenomenal; so simple and harmonic -applause- lol) Vocals are very good perfect for the vocals.
moshe was right about the outro it needs a liddle spicing up because since you played the whole song on a single riff you should maybe add a bridge with a key change to build up the finish.
Last edited by fensonpaulcaster; May 9th, 2009 at 10:10 PM. Reason: forgot to mention....
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Thanks for the reply fensonpaulcaster. I have intentions to do something to it, but at this stage, I'll be glad if I never have to listen to that song again
I think I need to play the songs I wrote in a live situation to see where they should go.
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I hate that, when you write an amazing song and then by the time its finished you can't stand it lol.
but idk, i've never been much of a live player, i'm definitely more of a studio musician and i get tips by showing it to ppl.
"If it sounds good it is good."
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"Its like I'm in the fourth dimension, and somebody's asking me to describe it verbally. And thats what the fourth dimension is about; no words, no symbols, no images, just pure real energy, and vibrations. And if I thought about how cruel of a world this is, I would probably commit suicide after awhile, if that was what I spent all my energy thinking about. I definitely wouldn't have strength to create music." -John Frusciante
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