very nice a little rough, but thats just a matter of mixing lol. the only tips i have:
in mixing: vocals need to be more up front, but you already said that
guitar and drums were good, but the solo needs boosting badly because i honestly couldn't hear alot of the notes of the solo. the solo was pretty good
vocals were also relatively good except for the mixing, and also you didn't seem to be pushing your voice enough (read on lol) but i think if you tried to sing louder by pushing your air out from your diaphragm a little harder it would improve the tone of it and fit the raw push of the song. you stayed in pitch pretty well you went a little out like twice i think which is very good. THe lyrics were very good too!
Great song though! very good and raw and well put together. Keep rocking!
"If it sounds good it is good."
-Eddie Van Halen
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