Not bad at all! Diggin' the SRV type tones there. Tasty playing, as always...
Somethings clipping besides the amph, though. I think it's causing the sound to be more distorted than it really is live, causing a "harshness" to the recorded sound.
Microphone too close? Is there a gain level on the mike preamp? If so, is it up too high? Are you going into a mixer? If so, are THOSE levels too high when you're playing?
I'm really not up on the ins and outs of video recording, please forgive any n00bishness.
Guitars:
Fender 2006 MIM Fender Stratocaster HSS in 3TS
Ibanez RG 570 with a bridge Invader
ESP M II Deluxe with a Tune-o-Matic bridge
Eleanor, the magical, mystical Road Worn wonder Tele
Blackstar HT Club 40