Bm collab tune

[sunvalleylaw]

Guys, that was really amazing. I love listening to all of you play. Quite an inspiration.

Ok, on the more beginner end of things, I started a new one up. Constructive criticism welcome. I feel I could benefit from good control over a vibrato, and my bends are not to pitch as I would like. Mostly though, someone hop in.

http://www.box.net/shared/gvr1sl18gc

Here is a different take.

http://www.box.net/shared/wsmhtb4sgw

Feel free to comment on both or either, and someone please hop in on one or the other. :

[Jimi75]

Sunvalleylaw,

I am happy to finally hear your playing!
Here's what I think:
- you play very clean and I heard no noises of undamped strings.
- you leave enough space to make the song breath, this is what I call a very healthy basis to develop classic blues phrasing.
- you key notes are pretty good. Don't know if you intentionally followed the chords but everything fits in very well.
- your bending especially in the first take sounds exotic. The attack and the way you bend reminds me of some blues great but I forget the name - sorry!
- the recording quality is briliant as is also the guitar sound

My friend you are on a very good way and I can almost smell which kind of guitar player sleeps in you.

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