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  1. August 23rd, 2007, 01:23 PM #1
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    If anyone has the time, I just finished writing and recording this lil pop song. I would appreciate any feedback..

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    Personally I think you would do the song justice if you increase the tempo just a little bit. Other than that ... not bad.
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    Another one for the headphones... like listening to the parts that way...pulling in from different sides.. mean distortion on those licks... I think ya got a great rough voice.. and pretty darn good lyricist imho... keep them comming man..they are good tunes to listen to... thanks for sharing!


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    Quote Originally Posted by Tim
    Personally I think you would do the song justice if you increase the tempo just a little bit. Other than that ... not bad.
    Sure sounds like a lot of work though.. I could increase the drums, but for everything else like Bass and Keys vocals and single hits, I would have to
    re-record.

    ACK...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Justaguyin_nc
    Another one for the headphones... like listening to the parts that way...pulling in from different sides.. mean distortion on those licks... I think ya got a great rough voice.. and pretty darn good lyricist imho... keep them comming man..they are good tunes to listen to... thanks for sharing!
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    My take:
    I like the vocal and tempo. A bit Dylanesque and a fair bit like Lou Reed. Your delivery is nice that way, kinda conversational and rap like. That's a good thing.
    Guitar-wise, if it was me, I'd back off on the gain and effects on the lead instruments and focus on the groove you're creating with the rhythm and vocal. It's got a nice sort of loose and cool feel, and I think a less overdriven sort of lead part would be good.
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    It has a great vibe dude and the composition is good more of a mixing issue than anything else but hey I never took sound engineering 101 either, my recordings have issues too so just tinker and have a glass of wine works for me
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    I like the song, the melody line is very good. I dont like that raw guitar though... turn down the DS and it will be much better sounding. Keep it up!
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    Quote Originally Posted by helliott
    My take:
    I like the vocal and tempo. A bit Dylanesque and a fair bit like Lou Reed. Your delivery is nice that way, kinda conversational and rap like. That's a good thing.
    Guitar-wise, if it was me, I'd back off on the gain and effects on the lead instruments and focus on the groove you're creating with the rhythm and vocal. It's got a nice sort of loose and cool feel, and I think a less overdriven sort of lead part would be good.

    Good advice to take heed of!

    Thanks man!
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    Quote Originally Posted by zeusse
    It has a great vibe dude and the composition is good more of a mixing issue than anything else but hey I never took sound engineering 101 either, my recordings have issues too so just tinker and have a glass of wine works for me

    My only problem, is I have enough wine to where it starts sounding good.. then the next day I listen and think 'would one more, or one less wine of helped'.. *G*

    Thanks for your time!
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    Quote Originally Posted by SuperSwede
    I like the song, the melody line is very good. I dont like that raw guitar though... turn down the DS and it will be much better sounding. Keep it up!
    Thanks my friend.. I will take your advice to heed pending the re-mix.

    Appreciate your time!
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    Quote Originally Posted by 333maxwell
    My only problem, is I have enough wine to where it starts sounding good.. then the next day I listen and think 'would one more, or one less wine of helped'.. *G*

    Thanks for your time!
    FYI, the correct answer: One More.
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  13. August 25th, 2007, 01:24 PM #13
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    Quote Originally Posted by SuperSwede
    FYI, the correct answer: One More.
    I kind of come from that same school! *G*
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