Personally I think you would do the song justice if you increase the tempo just a little bit. Other than that ... not bad.
If anyone has the time, I just finished writing and recording this lil pop song. I would appreciate any feedback..
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Personally I think you would do the song justice if you increase the tempo just a little bit. Other than that ... not bad.
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Another one for the headphones... like listening to the parts that way...pulling in from different sides.. mean distortion on those licks... I think ya got a great rough voice.. and pretty darn good lyricist imho... keep them comming man..they are good tunes to listen to... thanks for sharing!
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Sure sounds like a lot of work though.. I could increase the drums, but for everything else like Bass and Keys vocals and single hits, I would have toOriginally Posted by Tim
re-record.
ACK...
Thanks for your time and ear!!
Thanks.. you've always been very suportive!Originally Posted by Justaguyin_nc
My take:
I like the vocal and tempo. A bit Dylanesque and a fair bit like Lou Reed. Your delivery is nice that way, kinda conversational and rap like. That's a good thing.
Guitar-wise, if it was me, I'd back off on the gain and effects on the lead instruments and focus on the groove you're creating with the rhythm and vocal. It's got a nice sort of loose and cool feel, and I think a less overdriven sort of lead part would be good.
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It has a great vibe dude and the composition is good more of a mixing issue than anything else but hey I never took sound engineering 101 either, my recordings have issues too so just tinker and have a glass of wine works for me
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I like the song, the melody line is very good. I dont like that raw guitar though... turn down the DS and it will be much better sounding. Keep it up!
I can't say that I've given up on a flanger cause I've never liked the effect either. I also can't say the same about Tremolo. I hate them both equally. - Tone2TheBone 2009
Originally Posted by helliott
Good advice to take heed of!
Thanks man!
Originally Posted by zeusse
My only problem, is I have enough wine to where it starts sounding good.. then the next day I listen and think 'would one more, or one less wine of helped'.. *G*
Thanks for your time!
Thanks my friend.. I will take your advice to heed pending the re-mix.Originally Posted by SuperSwede
Appreciate your time!
FYI, the correct answer: One More.Originally Posted by 333maxwell
I can't say that I've given up on a flanger cause I've never liked the effect either. I also can't say the same about Tremolo. I hate them both equally. - Tone2TheBone 2009
I kind of come from that same school! *G*Originally Posted by SuperSwede